antigone

Wow. That's amazing. It made my blood run cold. Seriously chilling. The prologue especially was great, it's so graphic but it doesn't sound at all cliche or like you did ...

Hmm... I like it. the cage is unlocked and 20 turns to 10. you can hardly see the sun that's painted in the west I love this stanza. they quickly ...

Yay! Hmmm... I like Rose Daughter better I think but whatever. Doesn't reading the last pages spoil the ending if you do decide to buy it? That's cool though. I'm ...

I don't know how to critique art so I'll just say I like them. Alot of them are pretty anime-ish which isn't neccesarily my thing but I guess that's really ...

Is anyone else obsessed with Robin McKinley? I'm reading Deerskin right now which I love, and I think The Blue Sword is just about the best book ever written. Her ...

No Rivergirl, I seriously doubt you're ok. Everybody else, I realize it's not much of a poem. I wrote it on the spur of the moment when I was feeling ...

Yeah, it's weird, but I liked it for some reason. I liked the 'What a weird day.' line. I have no idea why it's so cool, but it definitely is. ...

Hey, I read "East", that's a good book. But anyway, nice poem. I like the part about polluted burnt down logged forests, it had nice rythym and rhyme and stuff. ...

I like "Mars is bright" better. But maybe that's just me. Does it have some significance? Anyway, it sounds great in my opinion.

crap. That is seriously amazing. I like how it's kind of choppy, it seems really intense. I like the images of breaking dishes and tunnels and blood in the night. ...

Cut yourself Starve yourself Claw out your eyes. You'll still be the same ugly girl you despise. You can't save yourself from the Lies lies lies. Listen to the voices ...

Cool. I'm not sure if I like how every stanza starts with 'I', but maybe that's the point. You have some really beautiful imagery. A few typos: "sainity" should be ...

Ooh, I like it. please write more. It's funny and I like Ted. There's a few typos, maybe you should read through it once more. Good job though. :)

I liked it alot. The last two lines were really beautiful.

I like it. You need an a in breath though. Especially the first four lines were really cool.