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Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
Call me shallow, but I couldn't get past the first chapter in LOTR. The movies are awesome though! Way better than the Harry Potter movies, which kind of sucked. But ...
Aug 18, 2005 -
Re: Call me a Dork....
No. not a dork. Umm.... It kinda looks like the incredible hulk? But cool, very cool. I like the axe.
Aug 18, 2005 -
Re: 2 Arts!
Those are both really cool! The first one cause it's all happy and and... Happy! And the second cause it's creepy and strange. Awesome! :)
Aug 18, 2005 -
Re: Title pending poll. Wow, this was cathartic.
Whoah, I liked that. Sounds like you're beating someone up. I love the rythym in this, and it's really well worded. I agree with Sam about the 'I gonna mend...' ...
Aug 16, 2005 -
Re: Tom
So sad... I like it though. I love the second stanza and where you made the smoke be Edgar's pulse.
Aug 14, 2005 -
Re: City Nights
I am the Master! Magician! The Punch and Judy Man! Watch me twist miracles from sultry summer nights, find buried treasure in grey graffitied walls. Let me guide you to ...
Aug 11, 2005 -
Re: When you bleed you learn - Part One
Yeah it was a little too emo in the beginning maybe, but I liked it. Good atmosphere. There were a few minor grammar mistakes you could fix if you read ...
Aug 11, 2005 -
Re: Laughter is Softer and I LOATHE this poem
I loved the first two stanzas but I didn't like the last one so much. Not sure why. Maybe the poem would be better if it was longer? Anyway, nice ...
Aug 11, 2005 -
Re: Snoink is a 40 year old man...
That was awesome! I kinda figured they might both be perverts, but still. Hilarious! Great job! :)
Aug 9, 2005 -
Re: Jack Olson's Vision Quest
I like it! It kinda made my head hurt though. I loved the last line. Only critisizm I have is iin the very beginning it seemed a little awkward maybe... ...
Aug 6, 2005 -
Re: So wish me luck my friends goodbye
The poem was pretty good but I really really loved the title. I suppose you meant to do this but all the Ims without apostrophes were a little annoying. I ...
Aug 6, 2005 -
Re: Lollipop's Gallery!
Those are great! You're an amazing artist. The dragon and the hand are my favorites. Awesome! :)
Aug 5, 2005 -
Re: In a tree (Ooh and now it's scanned!)
Prettyness! Sorry, I'm really hyper this morning. I like the colored one. Cool idea to draw it and then color it with paint. They are too that good. You should ...
Aug 5, 2005 -
Re: Dishonest, Content.
I love it. I agree with Jennafina about the needle images and I also loved the "Good things come to those who wait"' stanza. I didn't think it was too ...
Jul 31, 2005 -
Re: An Ending - needs work (Any ideas?)
I love the title. Cutting the periods like Chevy said would make it alot better, I think. Good poem though. I like it alot. :)
Jul 31, 2005