antigone

I like it! I love autumn and this is such a cool concept. A few small things... "I let air fill up in it Then sealed it up real tight" ...

I liked this mostly. It was a little wordy though. Maybe edit it some, or break the first part up into more stanzas, and it would be easier to read. ...

That's amazing. Like I told you. I absolutely love it. Yoo ah sooch a great artiste.

I like how it sort-of-almost rhymes but not quite. And the rose... in a dark room... that's a cool image. Nice.

I loved this. You have great images, and the last two lines were really poweful. The long lines didn't bother me at all. Isn't there some kind of style called ...

Awesome! her clothes are so cool. And her funnny face! I love that. Personally I like it a bit better before the colors, for some reason. The coloring is really ...

I liked it. I don't think I would have known what it's about if you didn't say but that's ok. I think you should take out the first "everywhere", it ...

Wow. That was beautiful. Sometimes poems like this seem too sickly-sweet but this didn't. At all. It sounds... old fashioned or something. I loved it though. It would be better ...

Yeah, it is very good. The rhyming is very well done. Great imagery too, and i loved the 'ding dong ding dong surprise' line. Also the title was really intriuging ...

I liked it. It's simple and sweet but somehow it seems like the simpleness is deceptive and it's actually way to deep for me to get. But anyway, I liked ...

I agree with emotion_less about the paragraphs. Breaking it up a bit would make it easier to read. I like it though. Lots of good descriptions. "But yet she persisted" ...

That's cool, I like how it swoops all around.

I liked it. It made almost-sense in a very weird way. For some reason it was really interesting.

Looks awesome on the green background. I love the fez! fez fez fez! such a cool word... Anyway, spiffy drawing. :)

I will fight to keep the thread alive! How exactly I'm not sure. But this is a post yah? so it is officially NOT DEAD. course that doesn't mean much ...