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Mostly I'm just absurdly excited that you wrote a poem about Gregor Mendel. You definitely have beautiful images, as has been mentioned, and I also loved many of the small ...

The first one is from Dead Like Me, and the second is from Dollhouse! (Or Doll's House, or somesuch.) The first is my favorite, I think because of the details ...

I love the way you said so much in so few words. It feels complete and doesn't force you to realize it's a haiku, it just kind of is. Does ...

drag ravaged twilight behind my eyes. O sugar cube, "Oh sugar cube" jumped out at me as strange and out of place. It sounds like, I don't know, something sappy ...

Well, it is teen depression. But much prettier than most. And the last line (which I loved) seemed to make it something more... [admittedly fractal] is nicely worded but seems ...

Towards the end it started to sound like a cheerleader's chant. But maybe that's just me :) The 'no' questions got a little repetetive, but you do have some really ...

Would you mind juggling instead?

I loved this, especially Hush. Your wishes aren't true. and Hansel and Hitler start a coin collection in your footsteps, and whistle the candle black and plunge us all into ...

6/10 fine. Kind of overused-ish

break a leg! I love that play.

Wow. This has the most amazing imagery, dark and beautiful. Especially, don’t let me die in silence. cut me open, let the bright freshness of my blood submerge the white ...

^ looks like he's about to puch someone

Perhaps we could revive it?

The Talented Mr. Ripley. And The Neverending Story really disturbed me when I was like, three.

I really like this. There's some really great descriptions, and you did a good job of describing your emotions without getting whiny or angsty. giving my tongue courage and my ...