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Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Aww! Everyone here is so gorgeous/handsome. ^^ *is jealous* I play guitar in cemeteries. :O (No really - this picture was taken before I saw H&M. :lol:) This is used ...
Mon May 11, 2009 9:17 pm -
Re: Double Blind Part 1
:D :lol: :D You can't imagine the relief I feel in seeing that you got this one. I was under the suspicion that nobody would dig it. More to come ...
Sat May 09, 2009 8:35 pm -
Re: Survival Techniques
Thanks for your review. I know I tend to dump information - I try not to, but sometimes I just can't help myself! That's ok. This can easily be fixed ...
Sat May 09, 2009 5:48 pm -
Re: Survival Techniques
Hiya, Face. I'm a bit tired, so I'm just going to jump right into the review. A boy near the front raised [s]her[/s] his hand. But something you need to ...
Sat May 09, 2009 10:22 am -
Re: Double Blind Part 1
Tip: on YWS, make your posts a little shorter - you'll get more reviews. Wow, man. Wow. This entry was fantastic. Wonderfully executed; the description was especially beautiful. I can't ...
Sat May 09, 2009 9:03 am -
Re: Missing - Chapter 1
Hi Miriam. I'm Pop. Nice to meet you. ^_^ First off - this wasn't half bad! There's quite a few grammatical errors, but I'm not going to linger on those ...
Sat May 09, 2009 1:41 am -
Re: Sachi needs your favorite quotes!
"Stupidity is a talent for misconception." -Edgar Allen Poe
Wed May 06, 2009 9:42 pm -
Re: Atmosphere
Description is good, however you can also show the sense of a place by having characters express certain emotions or interact with one another in a way that best conveys ...
Wed May 06, 2009 6:46 pm -
Re: The YWS Zombie Attack
Whew... For a moment I thought it was another fanfic. :P
Wed May 06, 2009 3:54 pm -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Flo
Tue May 05, 2009 3:43 am -
Re: In Which LibraLoo Introduces Herself
Hi, Cassie! Welcome to YWS! I'm Pop, and it's very nice to meet you. ^_^ I'm a freshman too (we are definitely the underdogs of high school society), so I ...
Mon May 04, 2009 11:30 pm -
Re: True Intentions
Poke, you're so silly. XD But yes, I am much happier now. My life is now more at ease. Alright, so to finish this long-awaited review. (I'm really sorry it's ...
Sun May 03, 2009 10:52 pm -
Re: Hey I am sooooooooooooooooo new here
Hi Kar! I'm Pop. It's really nice to meet you! *shakes hand* Since Evi's gone over the three greatest laws of YWS, I suppose I can just throw in some ...
Sun May 03, 2009 10:11 pm -
Re: Hello, Bonjour and Buenas Dias (or Buenos ...^^)
Hi JoJo! It's great to meet you! I'm Pop. :D Since the basic rules have been mentioned, I guess I'll just talk about some other cool features this site has. ...
Sun May 03, 2009 2:47 am -
Re: Questioning You, Questioning Me
Hi, cmarie. ^_^ I haven't critiqued poetry for a while, so let's see what I can do here. I want to die, I want to cry, to feel closer to ...
Sat May 02, 2009 9:21 pm