anti-pop

Name: Mailboxes Link: Summary: A letter sent from one old summer camp budy to the next Word Count: 361...ish If you could review this, that would be fantastic! I would ...

[s]Hi! I wrote this piece and have really been hoping for an up-front review. I got the inspiration for this while reading through the Book of James, and the Book ...

Wow. That was incredibly powerful. I can feel your pain and sorrow by reading this. I also liked how it was a compilation of couplets rather than whole stanzas. That ...

Hi! I'm anti-pop and I'll be pointing out some things that should be corrected. tearful eyes stare at me, loud accusing voices fill the room; angry words are thrown everywhere, ...

Hi, I'm anti-pop, and I'm going to be reviewing your work today! Interesting dilemma: love and words, or love for words, as fancy dictates such. Both being beautiful as soaring ...

The proportion's off...that's all I can really think of. The body is too small for the head, and yes, the limbs are too skinny. Here is a FANTASTIC website that ...

My personal favorite was the window! I loved the raindrops on the pane, and the rays of light coming through. I also like the picture of your sneakers...creative and cute! ...

Hi! I'm anti-pop, and I'm going to point out just a few little things here and there: Sometimes life is a sea, deep, dark and black And it grows deeper ...

Another Day Awake To the man who looks in the mirror and only sees his face, Staring blankly back upon himself, then leaves without a trace To the man who ...

That's not bad! :D The legs and arms are proportioned a little awkwardly, though. Her ears are also too high, and one wing is slightly larger than the other. The ...

I don't know if I would call this poetry, but it was entertaining. :D

(Hi! I'm anti-pop, and I'm going to point out some little things that should be corrected) The moment she let his car drive away , (A comma should be here, ...

Wow. That completely blew me away. Absolutely brilliant. All I can say to you is kudos, friend. This was spectacular. Only one thing: "Where you had to wear adult clothes" ...

I liked it, but I can't say it was perfect. I agree with many points that Squall made, and think that most of it was pointless. However, many readers enjoy ...

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