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Untitled Chapter One Part One "I'm getting off now!" Erica squeaked loudly into my left ear. Her dark brown braids [s]swinging[/s] swung into my eyes as she turned to grab ...

I loved it before I even read the actual poem. :D (and I laughed at the 'churches smell nice') The reason I didn't point out anything wrong with your was ...

As I lay here on my floor... I would remove the ellipses I can taste your smell, See the darkness and my body engulfed in yours. These next few lines ...

Because this is a very loose and relaxed poem (it doesn't have a certain format or rhyme scheme) it is much more difficult to review. Even so, I personally can't ...

Some people call her special, Some people call her names. Some kids poke fun and laugh at her, A nd exclude her from their games. (This stanza was rather bland...and ...

Hi! I'm anti-pop. This piece is kind of long, so I'm just going to help break it up a bit as I read through. :) I don't expect you to ...

To Die a Child for John Keats To die a child would be a martyr's death, Burning out in youthful blaze, (I love this) Free of love, life and shortening ...

Hi! I'm anti-pop and I'll be reviewing your work today :) Gears turning slowly, tumblers not working I sit, my hand on my head, glaring at the riddle I can't ...

[not here anymore!]

Torn If mirrored in the other’s face she found the image of the first the choice would be no simpler. The one—mature, open, striking. The other—sweet, amusing, familiar. He would ...

California Burning We turn the ashtray on its side (This space shouldn't be here...unless it was an accident ^^) and watch the dry black dust drift away in the wind. ...

I was a regular on but decided I wanted to be able to find a website where I could discuss my own works and ideas. And, wa-la! A friend of ...

Hi, there! I'm really tired right now, so it's probably not the best time for me to be reviewing anything, but I'll go ahead anyways. I didn't notice any major ...

Here's a poem of mine I would love to have more critique on: It's not romantic, but I have one other poem you could read that is kind of romantic.....sort ...

Hi! Here's my first-ever fictional short story (on YWS): I would love to get some more feedback; mainly just an overall speculation, I guess? Or, a standard review, as you ...