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Hi Demeter! :D I'm anti-pop. I have a piece I'd like to enter in a contest, but I'd like some feedback before I send it in: Oh, and I donate ...

lol :D I'm not really going to review this since it is just doodles on a geography paper xD I used to do the same thing when I went to ...

Hi sportfreak! :) Sleep embraces your mind with dreams of candy and screams. I don't think this line makes much sense. Who dreams of candy and screams..? I honestly don't ...

Hi Alex :D I'm anti-pop and I'll be your reviewer today. Death’s Tea Party I'll go ahead and say it: I like the title. It was very eye-catching. He sits ...

Hey Ann Marie :D Nice to meet you! Welcome to YWS! You will most definitlely find other people here who share the same interests as you and who are more ...

:o Oh! Well in that case nevermind :D

Hey CLB! :D Welcome to YWS! (acronyms, FTW!) This is a great place to help you with your writing. From your post, I didn't see that 'horrible grammar' you mentioned. ...

This is simply stunning. I have only praise for you :D I am absolutely amazed that an pen The lighting was flawless. Even the hair was perfect, which I personally ...

Hey Manda (Miss Slade) :P Welcome to YWS! WOW. Almost 15 and already attending University classes??? That is certainly very humbling...I was under the impression I was a genius! :D ...

How cool! This got first place in CastlesInTheSky's Imagine Contest! I'm so happy. :D Thank you everyone for the great reviews. They've helped so much! ******************************* “Get out.” �

Hi Shawna :D Welcome to YWS! We're glad to have ya here ;) Everyone here is insanely nice and extremely helpful...I haven't been here that long myself and already my ...

Wow! I really liked this one, Mia. Here's a few things I need to point out though: A stream flows quietly around her feet Waiting for someone she wishes to ...

Hi, Mia :) Welcome to YWS! Remember, you have to post at least two reviews before you post anything you've written, ok? Don't worry, if you stay here your book ...

A snake is slithering its way to her room She sleeps [s]soudlessly[/s] soundlessly unaware of her doom. Its black scaly skin streached tight across its body Red eyes cold, ready ...

Haha. Newbie :D Hey there and welcome to YWS! 'Tis a wonderful and fantastical site where your writing abilities do nothing but improve. I can't wait to see some of ...