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Re: Another Day Awake
Hi lordgluzman! I don't really know why I wrote this poem. When I wrote it, I wasn't actually thinking about it at all; I just kind of let the words ...
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Re: Mat's Reviews
Hello, Insomnia! *shakes hand* I'm anti-pop :) This is romantic fiction, so I hope you don't mind. I'm submitting it in for a contest and want to be positive that ...
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Re: Roman Table Talk
Hi! I'm anti-pop, and I'm going to point out a few things in this piece. Also, instead of adding periods, comas, etc., I actually wrote 'period' ,'coma', yeah. That is ...
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Re: [deleted]
Hi mnesomeye! Hurray for you!! *gives mnesomeye a cookie* You figured it out ;) It wasn't originally supposed to be her, but I figured that if people read 'My Dear ...
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Re: [deleted]
Hi, June! :D First off: I didn't steal your story, I promise! But now that you mention it I'm really anxious to read it! I'm glad you liked it (I've ...
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Re: [deleted]
Hey, Ducati! Thanks a LOT for pointing those things out....can't believe I missed that first one (haha, eating a paper) :P I really appreciate it! As for the debate over ...
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Re: Tipping The Velvet {one}
Wow. I couldn't believe she was blind! But when you go back and read the beginning of the story, it makes sense. This was really captivating. I can't wait to ...
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Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
I give you a 9/10 because: a.) I actually know all of those songs b.) Who doesn't love SexyBack?? 1. The Last Firstborn - Celldweller 2. When Angels Fly Away ...
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Re: [deleted]
Gone! Thanks to everyone who read and reviewed.
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Re: Tell me I'm beautiful
Hi Ducati! :) Tell me I’m beautiful, And feed My appetites. I'd change 'appetites' to 'appetite'. Hold me Gently, And kiss me, Roughly. Come up with something a little more ...
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Re: Introducing myself
Hi rld! :D Welcome to YWS! You will definitely get plenty of opportunities to give out advice and pointers here, as well as get great reviews and tips for your ...
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Re: My Dearest Madelyn
Thank you all so much for the reviews! *hugs you all* *hands mnesomeye a hankie* :D Yes, the mail carrier/postman/whatever scene wasn't vital, but I needed it to get the ...
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Re: If Life is But a Dream
Hi guitargrl :D If the world is [s]but[/s] drowning in a pool of cosmic emptiness, then shall we drown along with it? Or attempt to swim through the murk ? ...
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Re: The Sons of Liberty, Please Review!
Hi vox! :D Don't worry— help is on the way! *zooms in* The Sons of Liberty If you had lived in mid-eighteenth century Boston, you might have heard of them. ...
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Re: lust has extended limbs.
Hi there, leftt! Welcome to YWS! First off: It is a requirement and a major rule here that you post at LEAST 2 reviews for other stories or poems before ...
Dec 11, 2008
