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Hi guys! Thanks for looking over my poem. lol I'm well-aware of it's utter...idiocy? Reading over it this morning I'm saying to myself, 'What is this?' So sorry guys, for ...

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The love he shared at a cost Of all of those who which he lost Hmm...this couplet sounds really forced, which is a shame because you had a good idea. ...

"Good, Kates. If that's so, then mommy is going to go back to folding clothes." I think this would sound more realistic if she said, "then I'm going back to ...

I'm sitting at my window watching the snow fall. Just let the words come to me. I haven't even read through this yet, haha. Don't mind if you guys tear ...

Hi, Squall :D I see exactly what you mean about this 'telling' rather than 'showing'. Once I have some free time, I will most likely rewrite this with your critique ...

Thank you both Insomnia and Andy so very much for the reviews! I really appreciate all that you guys pointed out. I'm so glad you both took the time to ...

Hi Sarah, nice to meet you :D Welcome to YWS! I'm anti-pop! What kind of stuff do you like to write? I love writing romance and narrative poetry. I'm a ...

Pleased to meet you, Nutty :) I'm anti-pop Here's something I'm going to submit in a contest and I want to make sure it's as good as it can get! ...

Hi Sarah! :D Title: Pretty People Genre: Other Fiction Link: Part Two: (it is ok if I post part two also, right?) Thank you so much! I can't wait to ...

Hi, lilymoore! *shakes hand* A short romantic piece. Kinda sad. Thank you so much! :D *anti-pop

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A true fear- Was just realized. I'd take out the - Now I wonder how much I am despised This lines a little long; it is better off without the ...

Hi, LoveableLittleSock! *shakes hand* Ok, so I'm officially intimidated. Here's a short romance: Oh geez. I saw your HARSH example and whimpered. It's bad to start a story with dialouge?? ...

Hi, Kyte! *shakes hand* Thanks for pointing out the names! I honestly didn't notice that! Those are just the names that came to me xD For now though, they will ...