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Re: Poison Love - Chapter 2
Hi Mistress! This chapter was was written so much better. Your grammar and punctuation improved tenfold. You were also using a slightly wider vocabulary and you managed to expand on ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Poison Love - chapter 1
Hey Mistress! First off: This was much more satisfying than the prologue! I'm really interested into what the story has to offer now. However, I am sad to say that ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Book in a sentence
Harry Potter series: An angsty teen with magical wizard powers must vanquish a sadistic snake/wizard/thing. Am I right? :D
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Hey Winter! I'm a pretty big fan of scripts. There's just something about this style of writing that makes everything more entertaining. I'm also a big, hypocritical fan of Twilight! ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques
TL - finished with your first request Mistress - almost done kissthewitch - working on it
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Scavenger (1)
Hey TL! Sorry for the incredibly long delay...but here it is! ‘Druuuuuuuth. We looked at it all yesterday.’ Like CastlesInTheSky noted, at the moment it seems like chat-speak. Try something ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques
TL - almost done Mistress - working on it kissthewitch - getting to it Thanks so much for waiting. Sorry for the long delay...holidays are so busy!
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: New Years Resolutions
In no particular order: 1. Reorganize my bookshelf (been meaning to for quite a while) 2. Get my Silver Award 3. Learn to like Biology 4. Have a better relationship ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Paper Faces
Yes, I'm actually writing a review! It's not much, though. My face is a mask, for the world to see. Caught up in secrets, that one cannot know. Giving false ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Bubbly
Thank you for the review! Punctuation is not a friend of mine...I can't stand it. I'll try to figure something out. Also: *facepalm* I spelled [s]necrophilia[/s] fishophilia incorrectly. :shock: Woops
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Bubbly
I loved her till the day she died When I found out I sat and cried. Inside my room I stayed alone, All I did was weep and moan. And ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques
TL & Mistress - I'll get to yours as soon as possible. It's snowing here so I'm having a bit of fun outside :D
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Guess my name and win a cookie*!
Rosey - Oh, my gosh! I HAVE heard that song and I LOVE it!!! It really is beautiful! (Please pardon all of the exclamation points) :D Double-jointed? I've always kind ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Critique Booth Is Now Open
Just got through reviewing your 'The Unbroken Bond'. Simply fantastic! Hoping I could get your opinion on this: My Dearest Madelyn Thanks so much! EDIT: WAIT! Oh, sorry! It's a ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques
scasha - finished! Amazing work! :D
Dec 20, 2008
