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Re: A Bird In Katie's Head:part two
With a back (no hyphen here) pack full of paper, she sat down (no coma here) and emptied the contents onto her desk. The first bell of the morning rang, ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Roses and Unicorns
In honor of posting in your About the Author thread, I shall conduct the following message in PINK (greatest color ever)! :D I love the part about you and your ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: I'll have a review extra value meal,
Hello Marssss :D A little narrative poetry for you. Enjoy! ;) *anti-pop
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Threnody's Review & Editing Establishment
Hi, Threnody. Nice to meet you! I'm Pop. ^^Short and sweet poem for ya. :D *anti-pop
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hello, Kitty! So pleased to meet you. I'm Pop! :D ^^Just a short and sweet poem in need of a little attention. Thank you so much! *anti-pop
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Sugar-Coated Syringe
I lay on the table, Eyes locked on the ceiling; I counted down the seconds In my mind— Each moment that passed, They just wouldn’t last; This room wasn’t giving ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Death Note Parody
Hey huggybear! *hugs* L: *cough* fag *cough* and Misa: (through broken window) Hey KIRA! You left your DEATH NOTE in my car you jerk! (skips away singing Misa wins, Misa ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Reaper
Oh, a strict rhyme scheme throughout the entire piece? An obvious and clearly expressed subject? Who are you and what have you done with God?! Just kidding. I really enjoyed ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Such an Unreasonably Loveable Parasite
The snow came, blanketing the earth in sparkling white crystals. The bare trees reached to the sky, their branches extended like arms, imaginary heads thrown back in silent screams as ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: The Life of Nemera Sandrine, Chapter 1, Part 1
Good morning, TW! I'm anti-pop. Pleased to meet you. All of my corrections will be in red . Nemera woke up to the [s]siren[/s] wail of her alarm clock. She ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Our World
Hi Stori :) Well, this is relatively short. Not a problem! She certainly planned on it. Now, if only she didn't have to bring Kevin... I would just take out ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Aunty Pop's Kentucky Fried Critiques
kissthewitch - finished. Very nice, kw! niccy - done! I love it! TL - [s]working on it as we speak.[/s] Aw, man. Locked? >.< I was almost finished lol. I'm ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
These books called Fablehaven. The plot (as Spiderwick-y as it may be) is good, but all the characters speak as though they're walking encyclopedias. It annoyed me to no end. ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: New Moon Parody
CARLISLE: [walks down the stairs to see JASPER, EMMET, ROSALIE, and ALICE clawing at BELLA, who’s screaming.] Oh golly! What is this mess? You silly kids, I was trying to ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Stepping Into Static - Chapter 2 [Edited]
Hey niccy. :D On to the requested review. “You got lost? Oh you poor thing, please take a seat, you have not missed much dear.” Coma after 'much'. My eyes ...
Jan 18, 2009
