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Re: Play. Pause. Rewind.
Hey there! I really like how your story starts at the end. That was a really good idea. I think its good although i think you can dig even deeper ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: mirrors reflecting mirrors (edited)
I think this poem is BEAUTIFUL. I really enjoyed reading it and you really sucked me in. Well done, I really have nothing more to say except keep writing and ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Unfinished story - Warsky.
Hey, the story was quite good, although I think it does not go into the atmosphere enough. I think it would be better if you made it even more personal. ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Perfection
I want to fly away with the birds in the sky * ‘Oh John, I’m so pleased.’ I ought to care. He is my husband after all. ‘I really can’t ...
Aug 2, 2010