annapapadimitriou123

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Woaaah I got shivers reading your poem. I can really relate to it all! So onto the review! While so far away (**this comes off as a BIIIT cheesy the ...

What will happen when it all comes to a stop? What will happen when the sky opens and fire falls? Freedom will cry out We'll fall to our knees We'll ...

Hey! That was raelly wonderful imagery, i enjoyed reading it and i ESPECIALLY enjoyed the not precise use of punctuation. I love it when punctuation is all over the place ...

A stranger walks alone, Holding every answer, A girl cries alone, Regret sniggering by her side. The stranger holds her heart, and rips it carefully to shreds. While the girl ...

I found this really touching. I really enjoyed reading it, genearlly it was an easy read and an eye opener. I like the sun to some extent, but I believe ...

Very nice, my dear friend. The light and the darkness continue to try and destroy each other Smart, nice way of putting it. they had been sense before I arrived ...

Hey there! Nice message you're portraying here! There are a few bits however that I'd say may need a little work. We are the children of God Great way to ...

My dear temptation, you are so sweet, So very beautiful in fact. You know just how to fill the cracks within my soul, And feel as if you are the ...

This poem was BEAUTIFUL!! Absolutely amazing. I really enjoyed reading it and I absolutely agree, it just blinds us to what God has created for us. The truth like dust ...

Ok, this poem was slightly weird. I felt like it was more like a sort of comment rather than a poem. I get what you're trying to say and it ...

Hey, nice job. It flows really nicely. I want to be real, I want to be there. I want to be with you, I want you to care. I love ...

She’s scared because she knows they’re there, But they also could be anywhere She’s scared because she can’t end this life Not with a shotgun. Not even a knife. She’s ...

This was really powerful and full of emotion. It really made me feel what the MC is on about. Sometimes I do think it may have been too formal but ...

Wow. Clever well written poem. Well done!! I think you're talented. i could say that maybe I would like to read something a bit more psychological. As you've personified jealousy ...