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Re: Broken Window
These hands don't hold much to give to you These eyes don't see well except through you I feel like a little child standing at the window ready to step ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Bird of Flight
So, this was alright as a poem. I can't say it really grabbed me, i think it would have been better if you got really under the skin of what ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: The Hurricanes are Beautiful
I am really impressed. THis was a great story and very well written. In fact, i forgot I was reading a story because it just felt so real. You are ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: A Child's Dream
She’s running Till she sees a line of people standing In each she seeks love In each she seeks an escape From the monster of a frozen heart But nobody ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
This poem flows well..And I see where you are coming from. But to be honest this poem seems a bit too judgmental for my taste. Sure, people do dress provocatively, ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Love Made Us Human
When I kill someone, I don’t usually allow much space for guilt. My insides seem to close up and my brain switches off. It’s as if my body works on ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The night is always darkest before the dawn
NICE!!!! I am captivated by the silent winds. They swim through our sanguine nightmares, caress your very fears and hold them with beast like grip. This is night. Thats such ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: reincarnation
Hey there! Hows it hanging? This poem definitely flows really well, and I really like the mysterious ending. Never remembering their whole past lives, just the feeling of hope inside. ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: End
What will happen when it all comes to an end? What will happen when the sky opens and fire falls? Freedom will cry out We'll fall to our knees We'll ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Until Then
And after waiting for so long, he can finally breathe out. He smiles and looks to the yellow horizon But blood begins to drip, drip from the sky, the tree ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Heavensent
that was really interesting and i wanted to keep reading but then i looked at the title and it seemed to have some substance. nice work, it drew me but ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: I wrote this for attention.
I need somebody to tell me that I matter Because I feel so cold without the caress of words Even words with no meaning I need to hear that I ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Loners
Hey, good to read this. I really like the message it's passing especially as I can relate to it. But I feel you could have got under the skin of ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: For the children of light.
Were you born to feel imprisoned, And drown in darkness? Were you born to feel guilt, And carry the burden of pain? Were you born to despise, And turn your ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: A Man Not Alone
This was one cool story! I really enjoyed reading it. What i didn't understand however was the man that visited him. Did he visit him in prison? If yes, make ...
Sep 13, 2010
