annabanana

Well, I think you poem is great the way it is, no fixes needed! I personaly really love the rhyme, you did an excellent job with the rhyme and rhythm, ...

Great poem! I often find myself asking the same questions, what is love? and Who is to determine it? thanks for sharing!

Busy Ms. Bag was starting to sag, so she got very angry and was starting to nag! All of her nagging because of her sagging made all of her friends ...

Amazing!

This is amazing, I don't think I can find the words to start! When I started reading I was instantly hooked right in, I am a picky reader and this ...

excellent poem! I can vision what you are describing perfectly.. better yet I can feel the emotion flowing! In my oppinion you shouldn't change a thing ^_^ good job and ...

What?- Is because i don't know what YWS is. Can you let me know? -AnnaBanana

Great poem, i really liked it, keep up the good writing!!!!

Sorry, i can't really help with the ending, but your poem was really good! I very much enjoyed it. -AnnaBanana

I like how i can visualize images in my head, very detailed and well writen, And it was well organized in my oppinion. so good job! -Banana

Your poem was very deep, i see a ton emotion pouing inside your poem. you're very good at writing although your rhythem changed a little bit towards the end, but ...

Short, i love it, you found this???? I can't find hardly anything wrong with it, but that's jut me. cool poem! -AnnaBanana

Who are you writing about? You must realy like her alot, Cute, i like the writing style you used! AnnaBanana

Awesome poem, i LOve summer! kewel, kep up the writing