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Wow, this is amazing... The way the lines are all a bit disconnected totally emphasizes the topic of the poem. Really beautiful. I particularly loved "wondered how it'd feel to ...

Thanks for the reviews... I hope she's learnt the lesson too ;) Interesting ideas HarryPotter Rocks, I'll definitely make it less gender specific and I did like the idea of ...

Thanks for the reviews... I hope she's learnt the lesson too ;) Interesting ideas HarryPotter Rocks, I'll definitely make it less gender specific and I did like the idea of ...

Thanks Murtuza and Thersites! I know those lines are a bit awkward, I really liked them though and wasn't quite sure how could shorten them to fit with the rythm... ...

I love the song Wake me Up When September Comes XD Surely it's not plagiarism when you use quotation marks?! Lol, I loved it anyway and I think the endings ...

Okay, ummm, WOW! Lol, this is amazing, it's so eerie and just totally fascinating. I particularly loved the juxtaposition of these two lines: "Watch his body swing, oh once he ...

You make it impossible to stay, But even harder to leave, I'm desperate to fly away, If you'd only set me free. I'm sick of these four walls, I need ...

This is actually amazing! I didn't think she was dead, I thought she was waiting for death but was a bit mentally ill and was imagining a room full of ...

The lines, "I exhale rings of strange-scented smoke and laugh like I'm watching a funny movie. In truth, nobody told a joke" Really beautiful, can't wait to read more from ...

I love this! "Inconveniencing the next renters of the house" Is my favourite bit because it makes the poem kind of funny but, weirdly, it's sadder because of this. I ...

The making of a wish, Is often better than it coming true. The anticipation of the kiss, Is often better than the boy kissing you. Find the star that shines ...

Thanks so much for all the interesting reviews and advice, particularly Lydia your idea about spreading out the minutes in different chapter. I will definitely consider this. Thanks everyone XD

Thanks for the lovely reviews :) and the 'an' was a typo.

My name is Emily Young. I am sixteen years old. In one hour I will be dead. When I was young I assumed I would one day be old. Maybe ...

This is really amazing. I love your style of writing. Just nit-picking here but I didn't really feel much emotion from Alice when she's talking about her human family. Did ...