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Love this! I've read all your chapters so far and each one is better than the last- really amazing start. You've managed to get me interested in every single character ...

Hi Ilove Justin, welcome to YWS :) Now, on to your review... This is definitely an interesting piece, I liked the structure and rythm and how certain lines were isolated ...

Thanks for all the really helpful reviews :) I've edited and tried to take in all of the advice. I've made the rythm more consistent (although it's not exactly consistent-just ...

This is so beautiful! I loved the rhyme scheme and the old fachioned language and the unusual vocabulary you use is just stunning... I am officially a fan XD

The day I fell down the rabbit hole, nowhere near was there a soul to hear my awful, desperate scream plummeting to hands of Red Queen. In the dark I ...

I really like this, it's so powerful and so easy to relate to. I loved the casual rhymes and structure, it made it feel more natural and honest. "My purpose ...

What do people mean by getting featured? A couple of reviewers of my work have said they hope I get feature, what does this mean?! Thanks :)

Loved this so much! The lighthouse metaphor is amazing, and I totally disagree with most of Youngwolf1105s comments. Firstly "Love 'don't need planes" is not grammatically correct, but I'm pretty ...

Always second bested, winner of the consolation prize, gold medal is a stranger, but second place is mine. I know I could do far worse, yet when I see that ...

Thanks for the reviews and, yeah, it was meant to be "on" :). I've changed that now.

Thanks for the positive feedback and corrections, really appreciated! :)

I really liked this. I particularly liked the casual rhymes such as, "Friends smoking against the night, Talking of whatever it is that they might." because it made it wasn't ...

Walking home in the premature dark, I saw the lonely and abandoned park. not a soul sat on the swings today, not a single child out to play. Winter stole ...

Loved it! This was so funny and the ending was just adorable :) Amazing!

This is sweet and funny, I liked it. Only thing is I'd put "There was a young prince, George the Great" and add a coma after pince. I know thats ...