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anna91423

  • Lounge, The Re: June Review Catalogue

    Team Griffin XD 1) 2) 3)

    Jun 11, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Teams

    Really hope I'm not too late to join in! Question 1 - c Question 2- d an e Question 3- a Question 4- a and j Question 5- d Question ...

    Jun 10, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Still Kissing.

    Kissing. It just happened. I didn’t mean it to. You told me you liked me then my lips were on you. Kissing. Wish I could press rewind. Shouldn’t lead you ...

    Jan 19, 2012
  • Other Poetry Re: Watch people.

    I really liked this. It was just a list of thoughts about the world, very honest, and nicely put together to make a poem that 'smooth' to read. I love ...

    Jan 18, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Painting the Clouds

    I lie on the grass next to you, painting stories with the clouds. I can hear the smile on your face when you laugh out loud. We pass many an ...

    Jan 15, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Google Knows...

    Google knows the height of Everest: a staggering five and a half miles, she knows the members of One Direction: Niall, Zayn, Liam, Louis and Harry Styles. Google knows how ...

    Dec 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Race

    Wheels turning on the road speeding along too fast. Makes me want to ask them, whats the shame in coming last? Overtaking competitors, I see him whizzing past. One glimpse ...

    Dec 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Drowning in the Crowd

    My heart thudding to the beat of the song, bodies thriving under strobe lights, a million people screaming lyrics, “Because it’s all about tonight!”. Your arms around my waist, your ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: F*** You Inspiration

    Hey Cookie, thanks for the review! I didn't meant to offend anyone with the language in this, I don't usually swear in my poetry and I would never do it ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: F*** You Inspiration

    Fuck you Inspiration, I don't want to wait. I'm writing a poem and there'll be no debate! I've stared at the stars by night And the clouds every day but ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Making Snowmen

    I really like this poem, very sweet and heart-warming! "Snow is falling lightly, softly landing on shingled rooftops, ornate flakes expanding. And within seconds, there are children small Getting to ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Is it You?

    I really, really love this. I particularly like how the lines are all quite short which gives the idea the narrator in panicy and irrational. I love the description of ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Toxic Tongues

    This poem (as usual for you) is brilliant. I loved how you created so much empathy for the narrator by intergrating some of the insults people were calling him. I ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sirens in 6/8

    This is so simple, yet so absoloutly perfect. I loved the line "No man can live by ink alone" I also loved how you isolated it by making it a ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: passenger seat

    This is simply beautiful. The final lines just took my breath away... It just felt so honest. Thats all I have to say. Amazing. :)

    Dec 9, 2011


But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane