anime-girl13

High school never was my forté. From the people to the paperwork, I was just at a complete loss. I did all I could just to stop from failing my ...

Not all poems have to be happy and cheerful. I'm glad they aren't.

Thanks for catching that! ^^

I met you in the summer, With your crazy green eyes, And your crooked smile. You stole my heart Just by saying "hi". And I don't mind. You can keep ...

No problem. :D

Life is like sand. Trickling, disappearing, Fading into nothing. Yet there are billions of grains, Until they are all gone. Then life is over .

Like petals falling from a tree, Spreading like fireworks, My dreams are set free, Only to be tempted By the slick surface of the pond. They are caught by the ...

This is really good! I really liked it! :D The only thing is that it didn't really seem like a poem. It didn't have the flow of one. It was ...

I am nothing and this my friend, this is a tale of how I found myself again… A tale of pain and misery… This should read: I am nothing and ...

Wow... I just... wow... this was great! Loved it! :D I couldn't find anything wrong with it >.< I love how you rhymed it. Most people don't (myself included) It ...

This is a really good poem, like always. You've gotten the lines at similar lengths, except for the (I think you know which one) 5th line. Also, the second to ...

Yeah, I know. I'm trying but this week has been hectic for me, with relatives coming over and last minute shopping. :)

Once again, make sure you capitalize the beginning of each line. I also noticed that this poem is somewhat similar to your other poem, Fake Everything. Another thing is that ...

This is a really good, straightforward poem. Sometimes repetition of words is bad, but, in this case, it is good and really brings the point out. One thing I noticed ...

This is really good and your choice of words are excellent, but, I must add, with the really long lines, it looks awkward and clumsy. I recommend turning those long ...