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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Disappear into Seas and Stones

    This poem seems very mysterious and I love it! I don't quite understand about the "hope less" thing. I normally don't mess with much punctuation, just separating things with commas ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Apostle's Hands

    In some places, it didn't seem to make much sense to me. I'm sure if I read it a couple more times, I'll find some meaning. I really like this ...

    Aug 28, 2009


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien