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Re: The Mirror
“I once fell in love with who I knew was the best. Now that I crushed him, and moved on, I find myself missing what seemed to be my whole ...
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Re: The Elevator Man
I opened my eyes and saw myself falling endlessly into what seemed to be a dark, bottomless pit. It was all black, endless black, not a drop of light present. ...
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Re: Flash Fiction: Untimely Death
I was walking down the alley, about to make my way home just in time to get some sleep. I chanced upon this weird man in a black hood coming ...
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Re: Midnight Solitude
My heart goes out in the middle of the night this here made me think that your piece is about your heart and how it wonders the vast emptiness of ...
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Re: Instilled Lament
I also had the same idea about the iron thing! haha I didn't change it though. I guess I just wanted to say that everything ends, that even something that ...
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Re: Oh Hai Thar!
I'm sorry if I posted this in the wrong board. It's just that I'm so used to posting everything about me in an intro thread that I didn't think twice ...
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Re: Draft help: Prologue to the fantasy
Alex I lie here alone without hope to look forward to tomorrow, without light to guide me out of the darkness I find myself lost in. It's a morning unlike ...
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Re: Instilled Lament
I am feeling dark. Thoughts of death come to mind. Malice, hatred, and joy are intertwined. The light vanishes; Not a flicker remain. = The joys of life turn bleak. ...
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Re: Untitled
Help me think of a title, maybe? Any constructive criticism? What did you enjoy? What could I improve on? What does this mean, to YOU? 1. "Love?" 2. This part ...
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Re: Soul (A simple poem)
I kinda rocked my head a little here :) It's a wonderful start for your book. I'm hoping to see the continuation.
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Re: Heavenly tranquil
I'm not sure how this review thing works, but I'll just comment like I normally do on any other forums. I think it's about a person struggling to forget someone ...
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Re: Oh Hai Thar!
You can either call me by my username, which many have done so for the past 6 years of me being an online type of guy. I'm born and raised ...
Nov 11, 2009
