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I had a hard time reading this for some reason. I've been reading this since yesterday too. Lapping gently on the empty seashore removing "sea" from "seashore" makes it better ...

I so love you right now for reviewing my works so patiently, kindly, and professionaly! I'll fix this, the next one you'll be seeing would probably have 2 chapters by ...

so I had to erase and start a new one again; a more poetic version would be "So i had to erase and start anew" but it's just me :) ...

Some may have an obtuse angles remove "an" for the more options, more to difuse correct spelling is defuse. i think it sounds better if you add "the" before "more ...

okay. i see you as probably one of my favorite mods right now. i edited the whole thing completely. I now have two versions. This is the first version in ...

PROLOGUE Alex How did I let this happen? The first thing that popped in my mind as I regain consciousness. The mornings I have now are different unlike the ones ...

i googled "writer's society"

OMG i totally didn't clean it right. you see, this was written in present tense before, when i decided that flashbacks would work better. i apologize for the tenses @_@ ...

please take your time to review a piece. it's short :)

wow, someone actually loved this work :) i'm so happy. thank you for reading and critiquing!

it tells of a man who died because he was drunk when he fixed some cables. he's in an inescapable world wherein he'll continue to experience his death over and ...

hmmm...she killed her friends when they saw how she cheated on the man she loved. its like the friends found out what she did and now they hate her. she ...

I wish he wouldn't post and post his own works though. Try reviewing a little, he's already violating rules since we're not allowed to post unless we have 2 credible ...

this A body eating beef in stick and this To show gentle smiles so fine seemed forced. Respectful and never decline To show gentle smiles so fine As he never ...

looks better if written like this Fell in love, Got up in hate Wish I knew he was a mess from first date He was late, didn’t tell me I ...