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If you guys would notice the fact that this poem is unisex :D it's for neither girl nor boy but for both. thanks. i know it's cliche but i just ...

“I’m sorry” was all I could say, Yet you still kept on your way. It saddens me now that you’re gone; I suffer from what I’ve done. === Seasons change, ...

@Critiq: LOL so did you actually read the whole thing before you wrote the review? You asked Have you read the Divine Comedy? I have a strong feeling you've read ...

I like this. Good thing I fixed mine early last month. I'm no longer guilty LOL

wow. you really love this poem. hmmm...i'm sorry if i read it wrong. it makes much more sense now that you've explained it to us. maybe a little bit of ...

about your corrections: if i use your corrections, it would probably ruin the poem. so thanks anyway. and it's not in past tense per se. you really have to understand ...

I am grateful for the reviews you made for me. I didn't realize how boring my characters were until you came along! Thank you times a million squared!

:D I love Paris! I've never been there but I have my own ideas of what Paris is like based on what I read. I really planned on using a ...

Yes. I admit that "telling over showing" is my real problem. I've been trying my best to improve on this aspect by over describing things, as you noticed on my ...

I am filled with joy upon reading your review *tears of joy* I really put heart into this one. You know what, I'll take your advice. It really sounds better. ...

Thinking of You by Katy Perry. I'm currently listening to live version when she had her concert here last Nov. 14 2009.

I felt somewhat lacking, and yeah the tenses problem also made it inconsistent. I suggest you make this one longer. Try putting more of how he got you to "do" ...

Oh here let me get those for you.” comma after the "oh" I had gotten out of a long relationship a year before we met I think this sentence's too ...

A short poem Lyric Poetry 170 words Please, oh please! if you have the time, please review the first parts of my first novel! Prologue Romantic Fiction 591 Chapter 1 ...