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lol i guess if there was an excuse, it would be that i really suck at showing .-. and yes, the ending really had me confused too LOL and maybe ...

It's really untitled, so if you can think of any titles, please by all means share it. Also, I was wondering whether the ending is just right or lacking. I ...

Thank you for this! I will make sure that this story gets your interest once I'm done with it.

I knew I could always count on you guys. Thanks for such an in-depth review. It is more than I could ever ask for.

You're the kind of reviewer that I like. Always pinpointing the mistakes I make :D I am forever humble for your efforts.

Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2! A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten Romantic Fiction Word Count = 1807 I will be grateful ...

Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2! A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten I will be grateful to your generous and kind efforts.

Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2! A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten I will be grateful to your generous and kind efforts.

Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2! A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten I will be grateful to your generous and kind efforts.

thanks for the redundancy check. the dates...I'm actually trying to have a hint of Audrey Niffenegger's way when she wrote TTTW. the date will be significant in the upcoming chapters. ...

PLEASE READ MY SIG ============= My darkest secrets will you keep I think it's supposed to end with a ? mark. Either that or change it to "...you will keep" ...

Well, they pretty much said what should be said. But in my opinion, I would probably title the poem "If I Were..." since you also discussed the other elements. Then ...

A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten Romantic Fiction Thank you for your kind consideration.

PLEASE READ MY SIGNATURE! ====================== I think the title refers to the fact that memories of someone keep distracting him that the author might have termed it "trespassing" since it ...

PLEASE READ MY SIGNATURE ============= This is a nice tribute for soldiers who fight wars for other countries. Although I wish you would do a little spacing here and there ...