angel23

I liked it, very simple :smt001 and yet the imagery gets across just as good as it would in a complicated haiku. The syllable count is perfect and I wouldn't ...

This is an amusing poem made me smile :). If this were true you know how many "Alice's" there would be confined in their room?Over all it was real nice, ...

Hi I'm angel23 and I'm going to review your work :smt001 This review is quite long but it should help you out some! Well firstly I'm gonna start off by ...

hey there :).. thanx alot for reviewing the posts were realy helpful! The name of the song is: walking on air by kerli-for those who wanted to know!!

"Hi, I will review your post soon. I promise :D!"

I have never seen a church like this seems like a nice little place and the glass windows at the front aren't very common. But I would like to see ...

I was listening to a song and I got the inspiration for this poem. Its about a girl who is playing around in the gardens of the under world. Tears ...

Hi there :wink: today has been stressful ugh! OK so as I was reading along I really like the imagery you used and you're really appealing to peoples emotions!Over all ...

Hey its Angel23 :) I see your poem is quite popular, and of course I couldn't help but comment. So below you will see quite a few changes. Their just ...

Hi this is a very nice piece you wrote.Alls I can say is watch where you place the commas. It can have a major effect on the rythm of the ...

I can see that you had an ardour topic in mind; religion and the human interaction are common topics yet complex to portray.I believe you should add more imagery to ...

Hi :!: I'm not an expert in poetry and I know how you're feeling. But still I can give you a few tips that over time I have learned. Like ...

Hi, I have a few questions concerning poetry. I know a few styles of poetry such as the Haiku . I can write these styles because they have an established ...

Love... Is the sun that makes you wake. The fruit that keeps you fed. The spring that flourishes within. Love... Makes words of power. Giving a new meaning to the ...

I look before me now and I see a velvet dress . I will wear this dress and it will wear me. It is of fine cotton and of heavenly ...