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This is a poem I came up with really fast. Tell me what you think :smt001 Tears of silver sin torment my heavens no longer no clouds of burning fire ...

Hi there, I suppose another nice compliment couldn't hurt? I enjoyed your poem fully. I perceived a girl waiting by the shore, lost in thoughts. Am I right? I can't ...

Hi, firstly I would like to say that your poem is very easy to relate to. Every ones in a while we think how we would look like if we ...

Teach her to love the things she does; to think of what she's done and not long for what she's yet to do For young heart has sought so much, ...

This was deep! I really enjoyed this part: "Now I got you forever, and you wish that you never ever , girl you know you wish that you never... cheated ...

I can't say anything different from the others. This poem had a smooth flow. I enjoyed every word :smt001 As for the tittle I think "As time goes by" would ...

I really like this poem for the meaning it has. Especially this part which I found inspirational: " I never knew this road was so long, until I walked it. ...

Hi, this is the first poem I've seen that's this short; I like how its straight to the point and how it doesn't follow the basic syllable count and other ...

Hi thanks so much for the critiques, they have been really helpful! I'll try to get as much out of them as I can! :smt001

I wrote this poem with a lot of feeling, and hopefully it shows :smt001! Is this pain my hell? Or the beauty of my Inspiration? Does it free me? Or ...

Hi, I really enjoyed reading this! I read the whole time without loosing interest and that's really good, really! I enjoyed how you waited till the last minute to let ...

Did you draw this :smt001? Shes really cute! I couldn't draw even if I traced :lol:

You have an interesting trail of thought and the tittle: Crazy this Cow? Aren't you the crazy one here? It was really funny though- how the narrator wants to kill ...

Hi :smt001 thanks so much for the reviews; I see that I still have a lot to improve. I have found that I'm not being descriptive enough in my poems. ...

Thief of Roses cone me into your wings of night; and kiss me into silence with your lips of sweet justice Sing to me your dreams, until becoming the muse ...