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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: An Eternity of Shadows: A Vampire's Requiem

    This story doesn't read in a way that makes me want to take it seriously, but depending on what you were going for, that might not be a bad thing. ...

    Dec 5, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Introduction to "Eternity"

    This is your first story? Well, this is my first writing critique. I hope that I'm able to help you. I did not notice any mistakes in the grammar, but ...

    Nov 2, 2008


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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