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Alright, I got some more feedback. xD Ha6647: Thank you for pointing our all those things. His "lecture" really isn't a lecture at all, and I don't think it would ...

This story doesn't read in a way that makes me want to take it seriously, but depending on what you were going for, that might not be a bad thing. ...

Okay, I was finally able to come back. :O And thanks, every one, for the input. And I'm trying to edit this, but I'm having a bit of trouble. You ...

Whoa, those problems were totally and entirely unforeseen. Thank you for reading. And yeah, you got it right. Hona is one of the boys- the youngest one. You thought he ...

The actual drawing looks nice. The people's faces are sweet and the clothing looks cool. I just wish the drawing weren't so sideways. If you import an image into MS ...

I personally believe that you would do well to pay attention to the spaces that you're subjects inhabit. The dog and both horses are sort of floating off in oblivion; ...

This is my first topic post here, and the first story that I've ever written down in an actual story format, so it's my debut in more than one way ...

Drawing a line along the vertical axis of whatever object you are drawing will make it much easier for you to achieve symmetry. Drawing an entire grid might help as ...

This is your first story? Well, this is my first writing critique. I hope that I'm able to help you. I did not notice any mistakes in the grammar, but ...