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Re: Bad Jokes
Clever and simply written. I like the progression through the story and the small mystery in it. You really want to find out who Dean is. It was a bit ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Fyodor's Time
Hi! The writing is simple and clear, and the dialogue is strong, but the ending feels rushed. Why don't you elaborate a bit?
Jun 23, 2011