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Who Is It For? I wrap my hair into an intricate updo And cement it in place with hairspray and More bobby pins than I can count. I spritz perfume ...

Bare I feel naked Flushing at the way Your eyes burn through my skin Right into my soul Analyzing the parts of me I didn’t want you to know You ...

Wow! I was impressed when I figured out you included Latin! Very cool. Anyway, here's what I thought: O Celeste! I could drown in those cerulean eyes. Quam serenus! and ...

Asymmetrical Confrontation I’ll dissolve your “I thought you were busy” And simmer it all night Until it boils down to the real reason You didn’t want me there I’ll bind ...

I love the bluntness of this poem. It's very refreshing. I have some questions/comments/suggestions: Dream on. Love the title. Fits it perfectly. Walk, walk, gentlemen straight and tall with your ...

Fawn: Yes, I am still sitting here. On the couch in the library. Reading about petunias. Why not, right? It’s not like I get hungry or sore or need to ...

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You know you're a nerd when you miss school in July (and not just your friends). .....happens to me every year.....

Hey! Here are some things noticed/suggestions: -loved the first paragraph, great way to introduce the characters wolf like quality --- should be wolf-like quality as the singer ' s voice, ...

I have lived on an island surrounded by water for my entire childhood. I am terrified of it. I have seen the ocean call to sailors who never return. I ...

Hello! I really love this poem. It has a dark quality to it and I love the voice. Here are some suggestions: Preserve my arrows Preserve the memory I'm drowning ...

Blaze: Cassondra is still giggling uncontrollably. My face is bright red from embarrassment and it gets redder when I look up to see the woman and man who just witnessed ...

Wow! This is so close to a freaking amazing poem. (Excuse the mild language.) There were some really smart images and rhythms and rhymes. Here are some comments and suggestions: ...

Blaze : I look down at the feisty girl. She was shorter than me, which I’m not used to being 5 foot 3. My face is still red from talking ...