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Hey, guys! So this is an entry to a contest. The contest guidelines were that you had to include one song and two props. I choose the song Walking Disasters ...

Love this! A couple of my favorite parts are: there is glass pressed against my face I liked that you didn't just say, I have my face pressed against the ...

Hello, I thought, overall, the images in this were superb! The title just draws you in and the chorus was pretty strong. One of my pet peeves are poems and ...

This poem is loosely based on the song [&] Delinquents by Woe Is Me. A line specifically stood out to me was: Behind every mask, lies a man that can't ...

Hey! I thought there were some really great parts in this poem. Personally, I am a fan of rant-like poems (all of mine are). I thought the title is perfect ...

Fawn : I sat in my room all night, thinking about the last time the Iris Priestess had fought with us. It had been a long time. We needed to ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I'm not sure if you meant to rhyme, but it was subtle (I didn't even notice it the first time I read it). I actually ...

This is a poem-thing that I played around with. The first have are several paradoxes, then I reversed the order, broke them up, and combined them to form s different ...

Musing My Muse is a chameleon: a mermaid, a scornful queen, a fantasy whisked away by the winds of this harsh clime. My Muse brings me ecstasy diluted with pride ...

I actually really like this piece. I think it was all the relatable feelings that made it so good. These are my suggestions: They never get any easier, those horrid ...

[b]Blaze [/b]: The sun shines straight passed my closed eyelids and the fog in my head, into my eyes. I open them and try to pick myself off the cobblestones. ...

Life Cycle Of A Helium Balloon Look at them: resilient and lighter than air a tail of ribbons fashioned into helices They push at the ceiling optimistically bobbing attempting to ...

Wow! This is soooooo true! I love the irony of teachers teaching us about bullying and discrimination and self-esteem, then doing nothing when someone says, 'That's so gay', or 'Go ...

I love the voice in this. It sounds exactly like who I imagine the narrator is: blunt, heartbroken and passed caring. The first line is such a great way to ...

Blaze : I hear a voice. Jane , it moans and I am consumed by an urge to help the owner of the voice in my head. This really isn’t ...