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Fawn “Finally, time to leave this school!” I mutter and start to walk to my room to pack. It had been such a long time that I couldn’t enjoy the ...

I really loved this. I think it is such a great format to use! I vote yay for your first stanza. But I have a suggestion: Your smile beckons, enchanting ...

I thought this was a really cool way to write a poem. It's fun to read, too! I don't think it needs punctuation, since you can read it so many ...

There are certain parts of this I like. I'm not sure why you put some of the punctuation where you did. For example: Don't want an, umbrella. You don't need ...

In That Second My hands tingle. I know I shouldn’t meet your eyes, Eclipsed beneath your shaggy bangs, Because after all, Aren’t they the windows to my soul? And when ...

Once again, hello! (I am kind of spying on my competition.) I agree with a couple of the things this AngusMacdonald fellow said. I'm just going to pretend this was ...

Gosh that's awesome! I really like the ending! A couple nit-picky things: It's like walking on ice, in socks. It should be it's. It's like losing the remote, to a ...

Hey! I thought this has so much potential! I wasn't quite sure if you were talking about epidemic of amnesia, or just a case of it that is personal to ...

Hey! Wow. I really enjoyed reading this. I just finished Macbeth so I was in an Elizabethan mood. Hehehe. Anyway, I liked that you made it uncertain weather you are ...

I really liked this! I connected with a couple parts. I have to say, your first line was what got me interested. It pulled me in. A couple nit-picky things: ...

Hello! I thought this poem was really sweet. I liked the length. Is it in a certain format or just blank verse? (I'm just asking because I wondered if there ...

Observations Of The Stage Manager The solos, the lines, the illusion of glory That comes to those starring in their high school's musical. Both want - need - it so ...

I really liked this poem! Some people may have a problem with the lack of punctuation - I, however, did not! My favorite part was: We all want What we ...

Hello! I agree with GeeLyria, you should make some stanzas. I, also was a bit confused with the age, at parts the voice sounds 17, or older and wiser. But ...

I liked this! The punctuation certainly helped me understand how you wanted it to be read. I'm not a fan of rhyming, especially when some lines rhyme and then half ...