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Wow! So, my first rhyming poem. I swore I'd never rhyme my poems, but here I am. Anyway, this is in the format of a lilibonelle. It's pattern is: Stanza ...

WOW! I really loved this poem. It covers all the senses and mentions a lot of topics of the times. I have some suggestions: With the people I don't write ...

Secrets No, don’t tell me - I don’t want to know. Tell me half-truths and white lies. Exaggerate. Make me believe. Convince me it isn’t as bad as it is. ...

Like I said in the description, this is the first 'structured' poem I've ever written. EVER. Also, the first peoms I have ever rhymed in. So, this is in the ...

I really like this song. I bet it would sound even better with music! Here are some suggestions: But I still love you anyway I still think that you can ...

What I Think About In Math I was sitting in math the other day, Pondering about where Your virginity goes Once you lose it. (Also, is ‘lose’ really the right ...

Yes, this is horrible. But in an interesting way. I liked the different mediums, like the newspaper article, the journal, and the obituary (which I thought could be longer - ...

Heart-To-Heart I guess you Got on with your life. It’s better for both of us that way - or At least that’s what I tell myself. I never forgot you. ...

I really liked this poem! I looked at the original format, I thought it was unique. If you are going to have punctuation, then it needs some work. If, not ...

Would love to know what you thought of this and what other emotions I should include. I need a title! I can't think of anything witty or eye-catching. All comments ...

Ashamed of the things that make me beautiful. Proud of my biggest flaws. Hurting my friends, While I smile at my enemy. Fantasizing about a girl When my boyfriend kisses ...

Ok, firstly I want the rest! I don't have any idea where you're going with it but I like what I just read. It was engaging. Ok, I have some ...

Fawn I hadn’t wanted to talk to anyone. But of all the Knights and Nakia, I could tolerate Isabelle. Since I had met her, many, many years ago, I had ...

Confessions Of A Wallflower Please don’t be offended When I turn down another beer. (I’d hate to puke on your DC shoes.) I don’t think you’d want to see me ...

Wow. Such great emotion. I'm sorry about your friendship, but you used it to make something quite good. I am going to give you some suggestions: You held me underwater, ...