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I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has an amazing message. The biggest thing you could do to improve it would be to try to make it sound less like ...

Wow. I love this poem. *clicks like* I couldn't find anything that needed changing, other than what the others said, so I shall just praise! My favorite parts: (Oh, I ...

I liked this. It made me smile! Your rhyming wasn't consistent, it switched around so be careful. Here are some things to consider: It feels great to finally bloom; to ...

Wow, this just made me want to listen to heavy metal or screamo, which I rarely do. I love how you incorporate all 5 senses into this poem. Here are ...

This is my very FIRST attempt at lyric/songwriting. I am trying to put this to music. It's a jazzy Amy Winehouse-ish song. RIP Amy Winehouse. VERSE ONE Standards set so ...

This is mostly about how I feel when I'm invited to fancy events. And about how you always see someone you know at the worst moments (like when you are ...

I really liked this! *clicks the like button* I admit that I didn't read the other three chapters but this chapter makes me want to. It kept my attention the ...

I actually really liked this. It had a great simplicity and obvious emotion. Here's some suggestions: Why is my life based on pain (maybe take out the s) ? No ...

That’s So Gay! Why is the “N” word Suspension worthy, While faggot is tossed Around like a beach ball? Why is multiculturalism Celebrated, while gays Only feel accepted In their ...

I loved how natural the dialogue is!!! Honestly, it is super hard to make characters that speak to each other so well. I love how they banter back and forth ...

So true!!! Love the topic of this poem! I thought it was really neat to present it like a conversation. One note: I would capitalize the "names" that you use. ...

Frisson I knew it the minute I woke up this morning. It was just one of those days. The kind that makes me excited for the future; My future; our ...

I appreciated the rawness of this. I agreed with barefootrunner, though, I think you should condense it into just your main ideas. I loved how the second and third stanzas ...

WOW! I really loved this poem. And, thanks for mentioning the love and hate bit because I totally didn't see it until you pointed it out. I thought it was ...

I agree with LividRose. You took a situation as simple and boring as eating a pizza alone in your living room and turned it into poetry. I loved the bluntness ...