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Hello! Wow! well that was steamy. I haven't read the original version but I like this one. My question is: Is Cedric (or whoever the main character is) a guy? ...

I love the meaning behind this poem. The things that you can't ever explain to people. I feel like this ALL the time!!! I agree with smilelikeyoumeanit, that my favorite ...

Veneer     It’s late by the time I’m nearly finished my workout. My favorite treadmill is available and I can’t resist, so I decide to warm-down with a jog. ...

I like this. I like the sort of rhythm it has. I like that you didn't stanza it. I think everyone can relate this to a person who seems to ...

Hello! I don't think you NEED paragraphs but if you want them this is how I would do it: Fall's passing by And we say hello to winter The middle ...

Him maybe it is the uncertainty that terrifies me that makes my breath quicken and self-consciously fix my hair wondering at at this moment as I pass you in the ...

Wow! I had to actually read it out loud (which was a lame attempt to rap) so that I could do it justice. I really like the message. As well, ...

wow....Wow....WOW!!!! Holy cow this is amazing! You just put into words what I think all the time! I can't even choose my favourite part because I love it all! (sorry ...

WOW! What a fantastic poem! Such amazing imagery and emotion... I loved: - the overall idea of a 'domestic civil war' - this line 'My mind and my wrists pay', ...

One Lump Or Two? My Aunty was born in London and scoffed at scams like horoscopes and lifelines. She scolded, “Do not be foolish, Dear, one cannot tell squat from ...

Hello: Some parts/things I love about your story: ~~WOW! You completely trick the reader with the first paragraph - was not expecting that ~~~I like the irony of a liar ...

No, this is the end of the story. Yeah, I know it is short.

Morals I climb the stairs to Vivian’s apartment carrying two liters of extra-creamy mint chocolate-chip ice cream and a box of tissues under my arm. I stride hastily down the ...

Like Me “No, I’m not going to the party,” I say she sneers back at me, her superiority-complex evident in the rhetoricality of the inquiry Bitch, I want to add ...

Well, first, let me congratulate you on writing a song! I don't think I could ever do that. I thought that there were really high points in your lyrics. The ...