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I love this poem! All my suggestions were already said above so all I can do is gush now. I think the message in this poem is SO true and ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Overall I'm loving the characters. The dialog is natural. That's how my sister and I talk to each other. Here are some suggestions, things to think ...

Insomnia I’ve been sitting here all night trying my best to write a poem counting out the syllables wringing out their meaning I’ve been sitting here all night marveling at ...

Aw! I think everyone on this website can relate to this. I think your imagery is fantastic! *bows down to you* Here are some thoughts: So we stand crucified on ...

Bittersweet He recognized her distinctive accent, Irish, that had really never gone away even though her family had left Ireland when she was just a child. It had been twelve ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I enjoyed this poem. I appreciate that it wasn't preachy, so thanks for that. Here are some suggestions: It all began with light, Love surrounded the ...

Let’s Pretend Let’s pretend That you had the backbone To say that to my face That I had the courage To not walk away Not be the ‘bigger’ person For ...

I agree with isabellarivas43: SOOOOO pretty. Here are some nitpicky things: [Verse 1] Stubbornly, holding to the gates of my own cage. I fear being inside, but also what's out. ...

Welcome to YWS! I like the idea of this poem, I can completely relate to it. I have some suggestions: - I thought the rhythms took away from the meaning ...

White Carpet I vault over the fence and crouch in a flower bed, concealed in the shadow of the house - no, mansion. I bet anything this place could sleep ...

I really love this poem! What a fantastic idea... My favorite part is the last half - I think it is deeper and more thought-provoking. How strange would it be ...

Wow! What an amazing poem. I also have a younger sister so this resonant with me. A couple of my favorite lines: I started fearing ever wandering, Critiquing glance of ...

I look up the top ten most popular names in the year my character would have been born --- yes, I know it involves some math. I find that the ...

Eyewitness If that bar of soap could talk it would tell you how: the son daydreaming creates a cloud of suds so his rubber ducky disappears momentarily in the spumy ...

Hi! I really liked this and would love to hear it with the music one day. A couple lines stood out to me: The lines I loved: You turned around ...