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Re: The Nevermore Contract(closed)
Blaze : I crunch through the leaves that have fallen onto the path leading me to Ilixandria Academy. The air has a chill to it and the sun is beginning ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: The Nevermore Contract(closed)
Hey guys! Here's my characters: Name: Blaze Hellen Gender: Female Age(15-20): 16 Species: Dragon {Blaze is extremely powerful especially she changes into dragon-form (which is only when she is super ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: The Nevermore Contract(closed)
Name: Blaze Hellen Gender: Female Age(15-20): 16 Species: Dragon {Blaze is extremely powerful especially she changes into dragon-form (which is only when she is super angry, so not a lot). ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Suppose
Certainly not a masterpiece, but I had to get this out of me before I went crazy thinking. Suppose If I died tomorrow would you think of me? And what ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: and he wonders why things never change
WOW! I love this poem! Holy cow, it speaks to me. No, it's screaming in my ear. Anyway. I love it. I think there is nothing wrong with no capitals ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: River Shore
I really hate when people try to mold my pieces into theirs so I won't point out every little thing you could adjust. (Really, there isn't many, anyway.) First of ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Rambling
Rambling Sometimes I don’t get people. Honestly, most of the time I don’t get people. And probably, most of the time, people don’t get me either. And most of the ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Veneer
I appreciate you taking the time to comment on my piece. You made some very helpful suggestions! By the way, I didn't format my story like that - when I ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Mummy.
I love this! Why is it always the kids who have to be strong for our parents?
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]
For making everyone smile with his shameless advertising.
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Three word story
...there was a(n)...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: There's Nothing More We Can Do
Wow. What a great poem! Somehow it doesn't seem to me as if it is about the wars today. Maybe it was written in the past or perhaps in the ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Caution: Objects In Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear
Caution: Objects In Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear I despise the cliché of new drivers I, myself, don’t drink and drive or text my friend back at a red ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Festering Burns
I don't think this is bad at all! I really like it. I like the opposite if fire and ice. Here are some suggestions: -First verse: I don't think ice ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: lifeblood
I like the idea of this poem. Some suggestions: - to make it more clear about the river (of) dreams, I would definitely capitalize it. (River Dreams) I really love ...
Oct 9, 2011
