amygabb

Hey guys!!! :D Name: amygabb Age:16 Instrument you play or would like to play: I play the French Horn and the trumpet. Yes, double trouble for the Brass. Three special ...

Only 2 things are inspired by horror movie marathons in my basement. This poem and murder plots. I'm still working on the second one. *Cue creepy laughter* :wink: Scream It’s ...

Wow. What amazing emotion. I love rant-y break-up poems (mine are mostly that). Here's some of my thoughts: Endlessly until I hurt you as Much as you did to me ...

I thought this wasn't cliche-y at all. It was so full of emotion and that's never a cliche. A couple nitpicks: 1. You tend to forget to capitalize "I" in ...

Any suggestions for a new title??? I'm really bad at them... :D Anyway, I've been experimenting with different forms for poetry. This on is called a pantoum (also spelled pantum). ...

I thought this was pretty darn good, for when you were 13. (I could never come close to this when I was that age.) :) I thought the title could ...

Hello! This poem is from a prompt that said to do...... I (verb) / (whatever you want) ...... I think I need a new title. Any suggestions welcomed. Also, if ...

Wow. This is one crazy amazing poem. I love it, I really do. Firstly, your imagery was fantastic! Serious, I am speechless. I'll try and suck it up, though. I ...

I think this is a great poem! I agree with the previous reviewer, it is so true. I actually wanted it to be longer. The beginning is an amazing start ...

I loved this poem! It made me laugh so hard! I couldn't find anything that needed changing. Except that I agree with dogs that you should put it in dramatic ...

Wow. I really want to hear this sung! I agree with hudz96, that your rhyming wasn't always consistent. Actually, I thought the parts that didn't rhyme were some of the ...

Format: rondeau line 1 - a (R)(This line is used as the refrain later in the piece.) 
line 2 - a 
line 3 - b 
line 4 - b
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I thought this was great. I am very envious of your imagery! I agree with tanya98 about the hungry part. I think you just need to change the "of growing ...

I love this poem so much! I thought it was terrific! What a great idea. It's ironic, because you write about unoriginality, in a poem that is so original. The ...

I thought this was a really great poem. Your rhymes were consistently good. I thought the story was very relatable and I could connect to the message. Thanks for sharing!