amoerizzle

Wasn't that last ost just a statement with a question mark added to the end?

First one: 7/10...made me go hmm... Second one: 9/10...made me smile a bit

I feel your pain. I've been on this site for less than 12 hours and I'm already addicted and have about 50 posts.

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Wow! I loved it. It reminds me of a piece of poetry I once wrote. It had the same theme, but you seemed to get your point across so much ...

I don't know quite what to say. It was beautiful. It made me think and I liket that. Atomic Number 50....would be Tin. What's the significance of tin? Am I ...

She slips me a knife “Use it wisely,” she cries But the room is just silent She speaks with her eyes I love this verse. It's a great opener and ...

I have to agree. We do let it happen. Women complain because they feel that they are being objectified but they often participate in the same actions that they don't ...

You'd be surprised at the most common cosemtic surgery that is done in China. For younger women-the widening of the eys, the raising of the brow, and the raising of ...

An Angel For Me The light shined through her beautiful hair, Gorgeous and talented, her skin so fair. My child, my angel, and still to this day, She's beautiful and ...

Someday I smile; I nod, I say everything's okay. Hoping I can get the courage, To tell the truth someday. You look deep in my eyes, And still can't see ...

I really enjoyed it. You took a small amount of simple lines and made them so much better with some great vocabulary and really good imagery.

Running I'm running from the pain, The pain that's deep inside. Sitting in the rain, Tears running from my eyes. Your words hurt me more, Than your burdensome trust. I ...

It was good. A bit confusing, even though it was pretty short and simple. But good.

I don't think you should change anything about the piece. Your right, it was simple, but that's what made it so good. I think it would almost ruin the piece ...