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I have found a glimpse of life Through the content of the bottle, It’s cool smooth liquid that Evokes a burning sensation. My thoughts had been obsessive Refusing to let ...

Again I visit the sacred place I have created Led to by my circumstantial being With the scenario, as always, playing out In its routine, which itself has fallen into ...

Thanks Dave, I appreciate your review. So far this is my second draft of this chapter so I know I still have a lot of work to do. Thank you ...

Thank you both for you're reviews. I have revised this piece and will be posting it on here shortly if you'd like to read it :) Thanks again P.S I ...

This is lovely and very relatable to a lot of people I'm sure! I think you could probably expand on this a lot. I don't know if this has ever ...

Hey I’m Amie and I’ll be your reviewer today :) First thing’s first – your spelling! Straight away I can see three spelling mistakes in the first paragraph alone… tomorow ...

Hey, I'm Amie and i'll be your reviewer today :) Basically, you need to edit this piece so that your writing indirectly, which means that your showing the reader what ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) So I'll just jump right into it... As I sat on the front step of my house, the wind gently ...

Hey there, I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) So lets get on with it... First off - It's a bit of an information overload in this extract. ...

Hey, I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) Ok, so first off I can see where you're going with this and it has plenty of potential. I'd watch ...

“You’re finally getting everything you wished for,” my mother sighed. Her smug face grinned widely as she cradled the not-so-understated wedding dress, she had ordered for me from Paris. “Try ...

Once I stood in my human binds Watched over by Artemis. Never cleaner or purer In the eyes of the gods. I strode through life like a flame Endless icon ...

Again I visit the sacred place I have created Led to by my circumstantial being With the scenario, as always, playing out In its routine, which itself has fallen into ...

Hi there! I'm Amie and I'm going to be your reviewer today, so i'll get on with it... Every girl dreams of the big day - her wedding. Unfortunately, I ...

Hey I'm Amie and I will be your reviewer today... Lets get started then. Betrayal of ourselves and mind - I like the opening and the part that comes after ...