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This is good but I feel like it should be expanded. Or keep this one short and do an expanded version. I'd like to see it were you never actually ...

This is so descriptive and creates some gruesome images in my mind - I love gruesome! Very well written, you definitely have a way with words. So dark, just the ...

I don't actually watch the Vampire Diaries or know Ian Somerhalder but I don't need to to appreciate the fact that you're amazing at drawing! I'm so jealous, my brother ...

OO this is very intriguing, I'd love to read the rest of it! Does she have some kind of premonition ability? The only thing I'm picking up on really is... ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) I'll just dive right in... Firstly, the way you've wrote it at the minute seems very unattached, like you're listing ...

The following has been redrafted and reordered. This was chapter one but has now been edited (quite heavily) and moved to Prologue It’s been three days since I was rushed ...

Hey, I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today... First off you seem so young to be writing poetry like this - so emotional and mature, not 'typical teen' at ...

Generally I like this but honestly I'm really distracted by the grammar and spelling mistakes at the minute so I'm finding it difficult to read (even though it's short) without ...

This is actually a redraft & reordering of the novel. This was the prologue but has now been edited slightly and moved to Chapter one. It was sort of systematic ...

Hello ☺ I’m Amie, and I’ll be your reviewer today! So I’ll just delve right into it. Firstly, this is reading too informally. I’m all for first person narrative, generally ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today... First of all this is a beautiful and very sombre piece. It intrigues this an experience you have went through youself? ...

I like this and I'd love to read your next installment. It's intriguing, interesting and written well. There are a few minor nit-picks and I suggest you read your work ...

This definetly has plenty of potential! You should expand on it :) My favourite line is "you're quite the disaster" I like that your narrator has quite a distinct voice ...

I really like this :) It's similar to doodles I used to do myself in school. In fact I did a piece like this for a band I knew for ...

Unfortunately I can't see this :( it's too big, in fact it's huge - has it's own scroll bar and everything! Is there any way you can downsize it significantly ...