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Re: SUgar-Coated: Prologue
It’s been three days since I was rushed into hospital. Three days since my boyfriend hit me for the last time. Three days since I somehow managed to elude death. ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: 4. Enchanting Disillusion
Regardless of the strange kiss we had, that night was the night that cemented out relationship on its own personal pedestal. In my eyes it was like no other; it ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
Hey, I'm Amie and I will be your reviewer today :) First of all, let me just say that this was simply charming. It was really refreshing to see Death ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: 3. Flattery will get you everywhere (First Draft)
Thanks for the review theotherone :) Damn YMS changed my text slightly, the thoughts were in italics on my word doc but clearly YWS did not like this. haha. Basically, ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Part one: Chapter one
Hey Sinnerboy :) glad to finally see you on here. Sorry it took me so long to get around to this but here I am now. The name's Amie, and ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: 322sivart's WRFF thread
I've added the next chapter of my novel... It's only the first draft so feel free to pick it to pieces I don't mind at all :) Here's the link
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: 3. Flattery will get you everywhere (First Draft)
I never expected that my Friday morning would turn into yet another romantic rollercoaster. Since Monday I hadn’t heard from Ben, so I thought it’d be best to just forget ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Cornelia Who Was Sneaky
After reading Charlie the Cheat I had to check out your other poems with morals and I'm so glad I did. You definitely did not disappoint. Again, your rhyming scheme ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Charlie The Cheat
I too thoroughly enjoyed this! The rhyming scheme never felt forced so the flow of the poem was very consistent. I have only a few minor nit picks... This wasn’t ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: How to Create a Novel
Yay for the fixing though :)
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: How to Create a Novel
Is there any way to delete chapters from your novel at all, like still keep them on your portfolio but just not on the novel anymore. I have some chapters ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: No longer a part of the novel
I could hear the arguing as soon as I turned into our path. This was the reason that I’d been on the bridge tonight, to get away from this. It ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: We all knew it
Hey, Amie here to review :) You appeared right by my side, Giving me air to breath e , Lending me your strength, Carrying me through it all . You ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: The February 2011 Review Day Check-In
Woo. Great work everyone, I think today was a success and I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Savior
Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing tonight. Firstly don't sell yourself short, this is great. In factm I don't have any improvements for this, I like it exactly how ...
Feb 28, 2011
