amandajo

I liked this poem a lot. Although I really didn't understand what you were saying. It seemed kind of frazzled. I dont know how but that's how it came across ...

I lay in bed, Watching. I look at the Flying bird Outside my window. I look at the Trees, Dancing and swaying With the wind. I look at the Crack ...

I liked it. It had a constant rythym. I'm probably misspelling that. And I enjoyed reading it. Good job. :)

Thanks guys. And I know it has a few problems, of course almost everything does. Its not perfect but I'm glad you guys liked it. Hope you guys keep reading. ...

I liked this. It was a different way to look at things. I hope you keep writing, you have real promise.

I lay without breath, As cold as death. The soft whisper of hands Hidden by deeper demands. My body an empty shell, Feels like falling into an endless well; My ...

I stare at the glass As tears leave hidden Trails down my cheeks. I wonder at the small things, Like how I can feel like this On such a glorious ...

Thanks for the input. I was just testing out a story idea and was wondering what you guys thought. I can tell I have a lot of work to do. ...

"Honey, don't be afraid to go after your dreams. Fly if you want to fly. Cry if you need to cry. Don't be afraid of what you have become. I ...

I enjoyed the dominant role the kitten played. But I would love to know what makes the dog listen to the kitten. It was a good story. I saw a ...

Thanks for your suggestions. And it's my second poem. The first didn't go so well. I'm glad you liked it and I will take them into consideration.

i dont know what to say. well all i will say is that it confused me. i dont really get what your really saying.

it was interesting. i like how you put enough but not too much emotion into it. tell me when you've finished. :)

i liked your metaphor, how you compare passion with a burn. but to tell you the truth it felt kind of awkward when i read it. overall it was a ...

i liked the flow of it but i do think that you should put more emotion into it. i couldnt exactly feel what you were thinking.