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Hey! I've read those books. But not all of them, I think there's another one but I don't know. Anyways, I dont get this. Can someone explain these storybook things ...

no i was trying to symbolize my life, and the spice thing....i dont know but i know i was trying to get something across maybe how life is like a ...

Thanks for the posts guys and the reason I really didn't go into detail with this is because well I was in a hurry when I posted it so I ...

Hatred is Red, bloody Body clenching pain Inside I feel Anger At everyone At everything At myself And I feel out of place There's no connection No one's there And ...

I though that this poem held a certain amout of charm. I liked how it was short and simple. It was easy to understand and to relate to. This is ...

I liked how you used the context in this. It was interesting to read. I just have one question, though. Who are 'we'? Other than that it was completely understandable. ...

That was a heartfelt poem. What inspired you to write that? I liked it a lot. It was interesting. My favorite part was the ending. :) Keep writing.

I'm left behind. As you move on, I stand still. Nothing can change what's happened; It's how it's meant to be, That's what you said. How does it feel? To ...

This was a pretty awesome poem. I liked how you created your own style of writing. I thought that it was simple yet understandable, if that makes sense. :) Keep ...

Thanks for the reviews. And those three stanzas were all about the same thing so ya. And thanks for pointing out the mistake. :)

[iProbably not my best work but beings I had an assignment to do I thought I'd give it a try. Hope you like it. :)][/i] We're all given a name ...

Hey thanks and I like how it is so ya I re-read it and thats how I wanted it to be but thanks for the review. :)

Thanks but I don't even think this person is my friend anymore so... Thanks for the review anyway. Keep reading. :)

There were some errors (spelling, grammar, punctuation) but everyone makes mistakes. I really liked this poem. It has a nice rhythm. I have an idea about the title. I think ...

I feel a throbbing under my feet, A loud, raucous beat; Under the full moon, in the eternal rain I stand, captured by an invisible chain Holding me in place ...