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Thanks for commenting! Well, earendil, that bolded line was what I tried to convey as what I was consistently told or what was implied constantly on different occasions. I think ...

It's been forever since I've been on. What's been going on? :smt001 :?: :?: :smt001 :?: :?: :smt001 :?: :smt001 :?: :arrow: :evil: :P :( :smt001 :smt001 :smt001 :smt001

I stare around with my glazed eyes, and wonder How did I get here? How am I still standing? The people around me have no idea what I am going ...

How very violent. I have to ask, why so violent anyway? I think either you have a lot of anger built up or you are really creative. There were minor ...

I don't know how to reply so I'll do my best. One thing is I love the creativity and passion in this poem. There were a few minor errors but ...

I agree with carbonCore. The story seems a little rushed. I love the creativity and the surprises. But I want to know about this girl. Why is she shy? What's ...

I liked this a lot. It was fun to read and the ending was entertaining. I love the rhythm and how it made me laugh. It was really easy to ...

I liked this a lot. It was well-made and fun to read. (no offense) I did notice how it sometimes felt forced, like the rhythm was disturbed. I think this ...

This was an interesting poem. I liked the rythm and the way you used your words. The poem flowed really well and you did a great job with this. Keep ...

I really liked this poem. It struck me as well made and was easy to relate to. I like the last two lines and their rhyming, it added a little ...

I like how you can instantly see what potential this poem has. There were a few grammerical mistakes. I enjoyed reading this and I think that it's relatable and heart-wrenching. ...

Hi. I really liked the raw emotion, like how MoonTitanZan said. The emotion speaks for itself. I like that your poem has a certain kind of structure, it really compliments ...

it didnt say it was dead but whatever thanks anyway u can just ignore my submission then

Ok I'm in. Name: Naelie AneRae (pronounce an-ruh) Age: 14 Gender: Female Appearance: Small, around five feet tall, long dark brown hair, vivid green eyes, light skin color.....I'd go on ...

Ok I'm in. Name: Naelie AneRae (pronounce an-ruh) Age: 14 Gender: Female Appearance: Small, around five feet tall, long dark brown hair, vivid green eyes, light skin color.....I'd go on ...