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Hi. I liked this. It's really goot. But I do have a few comments. One: what do you mean to convey with the title? I don't really think it connects ...

I liked this. It flowed well and I didn't come across much errors. The only lines that I feel were forced, however, were the first two lines. Maybe you could ...

I absolutely, positively loved this. It was amazing, powerful, and moving. I found a few, just a few problems (grammarical mostly) in this poem. With the strength of the world ...

I agree, this poem is very confusing and different. It does have potential, I just think that you should make it a bit easier to understand. This poem is very ...

This was very....I guess the best word to use would probably be honest. I like how it speaks to me. It's easy to relate to, well to understand anyway. I ...

I liked this. Some of the words seemed a bit forced, let it flow a bit more. This was really good, it reminded me of a friend and his relationship. ...

Thank you for the comments, I'm going to put the entire thing into stanzas. I'll take your advice into consideration but I think I'll just go with what I feel ...

I loved this poem. And I also thought of Maximum Ride (awesome books!) while reading this. I wish that I had wings, you make it seem so magical and I ...

I love this, it's awesome. Sad emotions, angry emotions. They swirl together and create the perfect mixture. Good job. (sorry for the pointless reply, just thought it was good and ...

So true. Not much to say about this poem, except, great job. It's awesome and intriguing and relatable. I like it. Keep it up.

Amazing. Such raw emotion. I'm jealous that you can make the words come to life so easily. It was riveting, really, very strong emotion. I like how simple it is, ...

This was...heartbreaking. The title captured my attention instantly. At first, I thought you would be pointing the gun at the other person, but it was a surprise how it was ...

Frankly not that much of a spoiler for Mockingjay (which ROCKS! just a btw). But I like how you captured Finnick but I think Katniss would have actually attacked him ...

This is an awesome poem. I love the raw emotion in it. Good job portraying the scene. One thing though, you might want to consider different wording, it seemed a ...

This piece was a bit confusing. I disagree with some of the words and the visuals that I got; for example: she knows it isn't the brightest idea, I thought ...