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I wanted to tell you that what you did was wrong. You taking her side shouldn't have happened. I can't stand that you don't really care anymore; That you want ...

I was actually thinking that exact thing. About turning it into a short story. Well, this is just a start of an idea so I'm not completely done with it. ...

Kind of gory, what do you think? Wrestling on the bed, laughing. You pin her easily. She stares at you breathlessly, lips inches away, teasingly quivering. You slowly lower your ...

I liked this. The wording was excellent but some of it seemed forced. I see you, but I cannot speak to you. We are inches apart, but I cannot touch ...

Amazing. Just utterly astounding. Well, now I sound stuck up so I'll stick with amazing. :) This was very good. It spoke to me and screamed emotion. A few issues ...

This was very moving. I love how you described it. Thrumming, tapping, the music starts to come. Spinning, falling, tugging at my heart and soul. I enjoyed how you started; ...

I can't exactly say that I like this. It was unorganized and it didn't fit right to me. But I also can't say I hate it because the message is ...

Okay, one minute. I feel kind of guilty because I was laughing. But I wasn't laughing at the poem, no I was laughing at myself because and I quote I ...

This was very good. I liked the flow and the rythm of the words. I think that everyone, sooner or later, feels this way. I liked how you started it. ...

I didn't make many changes but did that help?

Sorry, just had a fight with a friend and this came out. I didn't really think about it much. First: stepping back was a metaphor because we were talking on ...

I stood there, On cyberspace chat And watched you stepping back.... Again. Sometimes it gets old, You know? I do. One-sided relationships End fast Don't last. Just to tell you, ...

OMG!! (yes, I used facebook terms, get over it :) ) This was very good. I liked it; it was amazing. I walked down the aisle With roses in my ...

Hey. I liked this. It flowed well and the rhyming was good and very clever. My mind was empty, my soul as well, These first two lines are a good ...

Hi. I really like the flow of this poem. It was very easy to get into and easy to relate to, as well. I like a lot of the wording ...