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Thanks guys ya...that was an accidental misspelling. My bad. I'll PM you guys when I have more time to explain the other things you pointed out. Thanks for the reviews. ...

Hey guys, ya its been a while since I've been on. This is just to warm up so I can get back into the rythm of things. Tell me what ...

Appreciation is in due to this. Nice. Great job but I thought that there wasn't an ending. I mean I just feel like you should have made it feel like ...

I like this. I can just feel the anger in it. Good job.

I like this. I can just feel the anger in it. Good job.

I like this. I can just feel the anger in it. Good job.

Thanks for clearing that up for me.

Okay, I liked this poem, but it seemed kind of.....a bit childish. The rhyming was simple and understandable. But I didn't really get at what the title had to do ...

Thanks for the comments. :) I don't know what to say but just thanks. Ya, I'm special like that.

color=#FF0000]This was really fun to read. Some of it was kind of confusing.[/color] Your expectations of me Has me lifting up this entire world; Going outside the boundaries of my ...

Thank you for the reviews. This poem is actually based on a dream I had, well, more like nightmare. How messed up is that? Oh well. Thanks again and please ...

Okay, thanks for the reviews. :) And sorry I did re-read it but I must've missed the whole thing. Sorry, editing right after this.

I can understand this poem. It was generally pretty good. I was impressed. I disagreed with some of it and I couldn't figure out if you were going for a ...

Pondering sleep of mine Around my waking body blackened vine The knife held in hand pulses with light Trying to carve my last night Glinting with a deadly glare Pressed ...

Thanks guys. I know that this needs a lot of work. But this isn't a 'sad poem'. I was actually intending it to be an angry poem. When I wrote ...