amanda0450

I want to write a short story about Cleopatra, but I've never written historical fiction before. Do you guys have any advice?

I have a few comments: Cassandra, her twin brother Red and her very best friend Stacey where walking home from a program at church when they all saw a very ...

Thanks for your advice! I wanted the poem to be a bit mysterious, because it's actually about my cousin's attempt at suicide. I never intended to share this with anyone, ...

“What if?” she asked. I only paused for a moment, and then it was too late to take back  my words. “Nah,” I replied, “he’s a coward.” I was so ...

Whenever I write, I always forget to put in details. After I read my story, I realize that there aren't any details about the characters or their surrondings. So then ...

So write the end first. That's what I did once. Then once you've written the end, go back and write the middle. Once you've finished writing that, don't forget to ...

LOL! I would hope that you like pizza, living in New York! My Italian family lives there and they're constantly like, "Manga, manga!" Anyway, I hear the pizza is awesome ...

I like your story so far. :)

Jiggle. Flummox. Jacussi.

You know you're a writer when... ...the teacher says "who" instead of "whom" and you correct them. ...you sometimes think in 3rd person. ... you are made fun of for ...

I wouldn't try making your novel more descriptive than it already is. Too much description makes the reader bored, and he or she may not continue reading. I've put down ...

I like your story, but I have a few suggestions: The first paragraph is one gigantic sentence. If you broke it up into two sentences it would be easier for ...

Pizza is pure awesomeness!! What's your favorite pizza topping??

Hello. I'm new here so I thought I'd introduce myself. My name is Amanda. I am thirteen years old and I live in New York. I've been writing since I ...

Chapter 1 A thick blanket of snow covered the ground. Alicia Jones pressed her nose against the window and wished she were someplace else rather than in her bedroom. She ...